Good effort on this, and for a first draft its a solid start. Some of the comments are a little confused though and need explaining in depth such as the hyperreality comments and the analysis of the women on the mens magazine. Also you need to add a section on target audience for higher marks. good start . 6/10
Good effort on this, and for a first draft its a solid start. Some of the comments are a little confused though and need explaining in depth such as the hyperreality comments and the analysis of the women on the mens magazine. Also you need to add a section on target audience for higher marks. good start . 6/10
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